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I would like feedback on my hub:

  1. passionatelearnr profile image87
    passionatelearnrposted 10 months ago
  2. Marisa Wright profile image93
    Marisa Wrightposted 10 months ago

    You have some strange spacing in this Hub.  Sometimes there's a lot of white space after a heading, sometimes there's a lot of white space before a heading.  Edit your capsules and check that there are no extra blank lines, especially at the end of capsules.

    You have several minor grammatical mistakes.  Try running your Hub through a program like Grammarly.

    Finally, you have a book at the end.  You do say you recommend the book but it's a half-hearted recommendation which doesn't make it clear why you think that book, in particular, is so useful.

  3. passionatelearnr profile image87
    passionatelearnrposted 10 months ago

    Thank You Marisa,That's very kind of you.

  4. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 10 months ago

    There are also problems with punctuation. A period/full stop is always followed by a space.

    1. passionatelearnr profile image87
      passionatelearnrposted 10 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you Rupert,for pointing out that to me.
      Can i add a photo from another website(thats not free photos site)  to my hub?

      1. Marisa Wright profile image93
        Marisa Wrightposted 10 months ago in reply to this

        If you have permission from that website, yes.  If not, no.

        1. passionatelearnr profile image87
          passionatelearnrposted 10 months ago in reply to this

          Thank You Marisa.

 
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