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I would like feedback on my hub:

  1. passionatelearnr profile image89
    passionatelearnrposted 11 months ago
  2. Marisa Wright profile image99
    Marisa Wrightposted 11 months ago

    You have some strange spacing in this Hub.  Sometimes there's a lot of white space after a heading, sometimes there's a lot of white space before a heading.  Edit your capsules and check that there are no extra blank lines, especially at the end of capsules.

    You have several minor grammatical mistakes.  Try running your Hub through a program like Grammarly.

    Finally, you have a book at the end.  You do say you recommend the book but it's a half-hearted recommendation which doesn't make it clear why you think that book, in particular, is so useful.

  3. passionatelearnr profile image89
    passionatelearnrposted 11 months ago

    Thank You Marisa,That's very kind of you.

  4. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 11 months ago

    There are also problems with punctuation. A period/full stop is always followed by a space.

    1. passionatelearnr profile image89
      passionatelearnrposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you Rupert,for pointing out that to me.
      Can i add a photo from another website(thats not free photos site)  to my hub?

      1. Marisa Wright profile image99
        Marisa Wrightposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        If you have permission from that website, yes.  If not, no.

        1. passionatelearnr profile image89
          passionatelearnrposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          Thank You Marisa.

 
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