I need some feedback to get my hub on the Rapture featured

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  1. AF Mind profile image65
    AF Mindposted 19 months ago

    Please give me any tips and criticisms you have as it is related to the grammar and structure. Any theological comments must be on my article. Peace.
    http://hubpages.com/religion-philosophy … e-Doctrine

    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
      SakinaNasir53posted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Hi AF Mind! ☺
      1. I think your hub is short.

      2. Add an appropriate video if you can.

      3. Attribute the source name/URL of your images and add more images. Make sure they are in the public domain  (copyright free). Pixabay, Pexels.com and Morguefile.com are great to use.

      4. Don't add too many links. Only add those links that are directly related to your topic. HubPages wants the hub to have all the information without directing the readers to another site.

      I hope this helps. Good luck!

    2. Robert Sacchi profile image89
      Robert Sacchiposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      You may want to add a poll, that may boost points.  When mentioning the writings or teachings of someone you may want to source the person's writings.  I don't know if this will get you any points with the HUB Quality Assurance people but you may want to quote the Biblical references, and mention Bible version, rather than just giving the book, chapter and verse, reference.  If a reader is interested enough to want to know the reference the article reads easier than to have the reader read the article then get a Bible and read the verse.

    3. HalfMoon81 profile image60
      HalfMoon81posted 19 months agoin reply to this

      the best possible thing is to add a fun, on topic video as well as finding a trending topic that people are into and lastly a poll is a great wat for your followers to interact. Hope this was helpful

    4. Jean Bakula profile image97
      Jean Bakulaposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Hello AF MInd,
      I don't think polls do anything much, few people participate in them. I found the hub to be interesting and helpful, the grammar and structure are good. You give enough Bible info for your verses to be found. You may want to make it a little bit longer, if you can think of another hundred or two words to add. You may have more thoughts on the topic. I asked you questions about it and you answered them well.

      And the pictures have to be from a source that allows you to use the pictures. Wikipedia may help on such a researched topic. SakinaNasir 53 gives photo sources, just make sure there is no watermark on them. Usually it says Stockphoto or something on it, and if it has words like that on it, you can't use it. If you use Wikipedia, click on the picture, and it will say if you have to attribute the taker of the photo. Good luck!

  2. Religulous profile image79
    Religulousposted 19 months ago

    Your grammar and structure appear to be quite top notch. While you haven't asked for criticism about the length, I think it's long enough to get your point across, while not too long that you'll lose the interest of your readers.

  3. terrance Smith profile image46
    terrance Smithposted 19 months ago

    Add a map

    1. Will Apse profile image90
      Will Apseposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      An up arrow and a down arrow should do the trick.

  4. attorneylancedan profile image60
    attorneylancedanposted 19 months ago

    Add more headers to break up the content. Makes the content easier to skim.

  5. melbel profile image95
    melbelposted 19 months ago

    Add more headers, make it more positive. Saying, "that is a lie" can sound "attacking." Perhaps reword that bit.

    It needs to be longer.

    I see no reason for a map (an above comment.) There's nothing to map out.

 
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