I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Wealth Accumulation; an Analysis of Capital through Marxist Perspective (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
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There are some issues with punctuation and grammar that I believe are keeping your Hub from approval.
Your headline is "Wealth Accumulation; an Analysis of Capital through Marxist Perspective" the punctuation should be a colon not a semi-colon. The same thing with your first sub-head.
Capital letters keep entering the text in strange places. There are also some spelling errors.
Let's take a look at one section
While, cotton is achieved as an end product, as a crop after doing farming. Farming involves labor, i.e., cultivation, irrigation, etc. Therefore, cotton is not a considered as a natural raw material because it holds human labor. In modern term, it is named as a Processed Material or INPUT material.
The first sentence is very awkward. It might be better stated as "Cotton is an end product that is the result of farming." I'd remove the second sentence. Then, "cotton is not a natural raw material because it involves human labour."
Next "In modern terms, it is called a processed Material or input material."
I suggest running your text through grammar and spelling checking software such as Grammarly or Hemingway. Also, spend some time at the Learning Center. https://hubpageshelp.com/
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