I'd like feedback on my Hub: Wealth Accumulation; an Analysis of Capital through

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  1. Maqbool Masi profile image66
    Maqbool Masiposted 19 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Wealth Accumulation; an Analysis of Capital through Marxist Perspective (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Will Apse profile image90
      Will Apseposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      You cannot take just any image from Google search. You need to find images that the creator or copyright holder of those images has clearly labelled for reuse with a creative commons licence.

      Go to Google search, search for an image, apply the filter that says 'labeled for use', choose an image and credit the copyright holder. Something like this:

      https://www.google.co.th/search?q=Marxi … tbs=sur:fc

      or this, in public domain on Pixabay:

      https://pixabay.com/en/germany-marx-eng … nd-700258/

      1. Maqbool Masi profile image66
        Maqbool Masiposted 19 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you. Will update accordingly

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 19 months ago

    There are some issues with punctuation and grammar that I believe are keeping your Hub from approval.

    Your headline is "Wealth Accumulation; an Analysis of Capital through Marxist Perspective" the punctuation should be a colon not a semi-colon. The same thing with your first sub-head.

    Capital letters keep entering the text in strange places. There are also some spelling errors.

    Let's take a look at one section

    While, cotton is achieved as an end product, as a crop after doing farming. Farming involves labor, i.e., cultivation, irrigation, etc. Therefore, cotton is not a considered as a natural raw material because it holds human labor. In modern term, it is named as a Processed Material or INPUT material.


    The first sentence is very awkward. It might be better stated as "Cotton is an end product that is the result of farming." I'd remove the second sentence. Then, "cotton is not a natural raw material because it involves human labour."

    Next "In modern terms, it is called a processed Material or input material."

    I suggest running your text through grammar and spelling checking software such as Grammarly or Hemingway. Also, spend some time at the Learning Center. https://hubpageshelp.com/

    1. Maqbool Masi profile image66
      Maqbool Masiposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your time and important advice.

 
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