I'd like feedback on my article: How to Create Wealth and Overcome Poverty

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   Bernard Barclayposted 7 weeks ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: How to Create Wealth and Overcome Poverty

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      theraggededgeposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      I already did. The content is AI-created and the model would never work in real life.

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   Bernard Barclayposted 7 weeks ago

   The content is not AI created, it is simply maths 10x100x52= $52,000 the deposit for a house every year, it is not rocket science, we bought our house for $290,000 and sold it for $640,000 if families worked together, you could create family wealth, granted I talked to AI about my idea, but AI did not create it, I did

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      theraggededgeposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      Who are 'Internet' and 'CoPilot'? If you pasted in sections from those sources, then you have used AI. It's not allowed here and can get you banned.
      
      Perhaps you need to explain how some people in the 100 cohort will benefit if they have to wait years and years for their home? Your house purchase isn't relevant to the content unless you saved for it along with 99 other people.
      
      Sorry to be harsh, but the maths is not feasible.

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         Bernard Barclayposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

         1. When you look onto the internet, you can find answers to your questions, the internet has articles written by other people, throughout history, from the internet I was able to see supporting evidence, that the argument or fight between rich and poor, has been going on for centuries, so I recorded those internet sites, as supporting evidence for my theory. I think you might have heard about Plato and Aristotle. 2. Copilot was the AI system, I talked with about my idea. 3. Granted it is not a get-rich-quick scheme, the assets would build up slowly over time, in one hundred years the group would own, one hundred houses, so some people might not see the results, in their lifetime but if you are working, it leaves the rest of your wage to yourself, meaning you could buy your own home, or invest improving your education, to create better careers for your self but the system, would also sell the houses to purchase companies or hotels businesses, that over time could also add their profits, to the group funds allowing the group, to buy other companies with the joint profits, it's a long term vision for creating family wealth and employment, the hotels and companies, would create jobs for your future family members and other people in your community.

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         Bernard Barclayposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

         why do you think the maths is not feasible? 10 dollars times one hundred people is a thousand dollars times fifty-two weeks in a year is fifty-two thousand dollars 52,000 dollars could be used to invest in buying a house renting the house out could pay for the mortgage
         Selling those houses one at a time after say five to ten years would give you the money to buy a hotel creating employment and profits from the hotels would add to the group funds perhaps increasing the speed and allowing you to buy other hotels or businesses creating work for your family or perhaps for yourself. what part of the maths doesn't work

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            Bernard Barclayposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

            When you write a thesis for university, you have to provide supporting evidence for your theory, so I researched for supporting evidence off the internet, and talked, with Copilot the AI system, also created supporting evidence, so I included that conversation as supporting evidence but didn't realize, they had rules against those things, on this site thank you for letting me know.
            The only difference between Paris Hiltons money and yours is that her family created investments in the past making her rich if people invested together they could make their families wealthy but yes it would take time.

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         Bernard Barclayposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

         Imagine you work in a factory, with hundreds of other people, saving together, you are investing five hundred and twenty dollars per year, but so are the other people, you already have employment, so you don't need an income, but you're thinking about your future, your group buys the houses and makes a profit, from the rising prices of housing.
         Then selling the houses, one after another, you buy service stations, hotels, or perhaps even supermarkets, depending, on the size of the group.
         Ten thousand people, saving ten dollars per week, is a hundred thousand dollars per week, buying one company after another, would eventually create wealth for the group.
         It would also provide, employment for the future, if your factory shuts down.
         Granted it is not a get-rich-quick scheme but if you take the concept out to the world.
         There are 8.2 billion people in the world, and instead of giving all our money away to charity or wasting it on cigarettes and alcohol, we could learn to invest it as groups.
         Creating employment for other people, seven hundred million people, live on less than $2.15 per day.
         Creating employment worldwide, overcoming unemployment, and paying fair wages from the profits of companies, would give those people wages, to feed their children.
         Creating profits from the investment for ourselves.
         It is not just about creating wealth, it's about creating employment worldwide.
         Employment that allows people, to feed their families, overcoming poverty and starvation.

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