I'd like feedback on my Hub: Indian Island Treasure - Andaman's

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  1. Pal Makkar profile image60
    Pal Makkarposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Indian Island Treasure - Andaman's (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Will Apse profile image91
      Will Apseposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      There is a lot of info on your page but I reckon it needs to be organized better.

      First, I think you need to decide what the purpose of the page is. Is it aimed at travelers? Is it a geography lesson?

      Make sure the title tells readers exactly what to expect from the page then make sure that everything on the page is relevant and well organised.

      A pic at the beginning would help. And that pic at the end is probably too poor quality to use.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 20 months ago

    There are many grammar and punctuation issues as well as the appearance of random capital letters. The omission of the definite article "the" is frequent.

    Try running your article through a program such as Grammarly, which should pick up these kinds of mistakes.

  3. AshutoshJoshi06 profile image90
    AshutoshJoshi06posted 20 months ago

    Hi Pal,

    Overall your hub is informative but you may want to proofread the entire thing.
    Capital letters popping up in the middle of a sentence.
    Usage of punctuation especially 'comma' needs to be checked.
    Sentence construction.

    One more thing which I personally felt inappropriate is the intro. Why would you want to begin with a long intro to India instead of the actual topic?

 
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