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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Ways to Increase Your Metabolism Naturally and Lose

  1. srirad0675 profile image91
    srirad0675posted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Ways to Increase Your Metabolism Naturally and Lose Weight. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image88
      Jason mackenzieposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Informative hub, but I would recommend segregating the content into specific subheadings and putting all the relevant points under that. As of now it appears to be a little haphazard and disorganized. If you can organize the information a bit it would greatly improve readability. Thanks, regards...

      1. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        I'm afraid this is one of those topics that HP discourages. There are zillions of articles out there with exactly the same information. Why does the world need another one?

        https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … ted-topics

        Also weight loss comes under medical advice - so be careful of giving advice for which you aren't qualified. Not all nutritionists agree that calories are the key to weight loss. There are many factors involved. You state some recommendations as if they are the only way like this, "You need to adjust your diet based on your RMR. The daily consumption to maintain your weight should be RMR x 1.15. It is not advisable to exceed or lower your maintenance intake." Who says?

        Lose the exclamation points! They look unprofessional.

        1. srirad0675 profile image91
          srirad0675posted 6 months agoin reply to this

          Thank you.

    2. SherrieWeynand profile image83
      SherrieWeynandposted 6 months ago

      Obese people are more likely to get cancer? Where did you learn that? Cancer is an insidious, non-discriminatory disease. Not to mention there are a myriad of different cancers. Seems like a lot of the information you've provided could be treading in dangerous waters. Just a thought.

      1. greenmind profile image93
        greenmindposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        Sherrie fwiw I googled "is obesity linked to cancer" and there appears to be some pretty sturdy evidence that it is. However your main point, that it's unwise and even dangerous for non-professionals to give medical advice, is very true.

     
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