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I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to survive Mercury Retrograde 4/9/17.

  1. Empathsoul profile image57
    Empathsoulposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How to survive Mercury Retrograde 4/9/17. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 months ago

    I'd get rid of the colloquialisms such as "Like, seriously." "Every year!" "well yeah," Ditto the exclamation points.

    "•At this time people experience many adverse affects" that should be effects. There are other grammar issues. Capital letters appear randomly for no reason.

    Do you have permission to use the images? They must be free of copyright restrictions and properly credited.

    Invest some time at the Learning Center https://hubpageshelp.com/

    1. Empathsoul profile image57
      Empathsoulposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your feedback. I have written that way on Wordpress and it was never an issue. I have a lot of switching up to do. The pics I create do I source it as self or name the site? Thanks in advance

      1. chasmac profile image97
        chasmacposted 7 months agoin reply to this

        For your own pics just put your name 'Empathsoul' in the source field of the photo capsule.

        1. Empathsoul profile image57
          Empathsoulposted 7 months agoin reply to this

          Okay will do. Thanks so much for your feedback.

 
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