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I'd like feedback on my Hub: I miss Home

  1. Princess Khalsa profile image80
    Princess Khalsaposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub I miss Home. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. pen promulgates profile image42
    pen promulgatesposted 5 months ago

    It's difficult to understand.
    No punctuation at all.

    1. Marisa Wright profile image99
      Marisa Wrightposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      It's a poem, so it's allowed to have no punctuation.   

      If this failed QAP, I'm not sure why, because poems don't have to meet the same criteria as other articles. As a poem, it looks fine.   Do you have it published anywhere else online?

      1. Princess Khalsa profile image80
        Princess Khalsaposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        No, i have not published it anywhere else.

        Thank you

 
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