I'd like feedback on my Hub: Place which I visit In Himachal Pradesh

  1. Anil Nathta profile image61
    Anil Nathtaposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Place which I visit In  Himachal Pradesh (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. pen promulgates profile image79
    pen promulgatesposted 2 months ago

    Hi anil.
    The article needs much improvement.
    Below are few points I suggest.
    1) Are the image from a proper source?
    Only cco domain images or the ones with permission can be used
    2) The first paragraph is very short, extend it please.
    3) Many punctuation errors
    4) In mahadev summit: you mistakenly wrote 'there are may couple of ways.' I guess you mean there are many couple of ways
    5) There are many grammatical errors. for instance, in the same paragraph you wrote people who lives, when it should be people who live.. The next error is plan area.. I guess u mean plain/plane area.. You wrote you have walk day and night when it should be you have to walk day and night.
    6) In shrikand travel route medicine is spelled wrong. You write I as 'i'
    Use apps like Grammarly or Hemingway to correct such grammar mistakes
    7) I am sorry but I lost interest in reading after two paragraphs. It can be a great article if you improve it.
    Please proof read the article. That will help.
    Good luck

  3. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 2 months ago

    You also risk being sued or charged for republishing images without permission. You can't just do a Google search and use any photo you like. Images are subject to copyright in the same way as any creative work.

    https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use

 
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