I'd like feedback on my article: What Benefits Could You Get from Writing?

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  1. manunulat profile image60
    manunulatposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What Benefits Could You Get from Writing?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Carb Diva profile image95
    Carb Divaposted 7 months ago

    I love the message that you are conveying here. However, there are some sentences that need a little improvement. Your English is quite good, but it is still obvious that English is not your first language. May I suggest Grammarly.com. It is a free program that will analyze your writing as you type, making suggestions for grammar and punctuation as you go. Good luck to you and welcome to Hub Pages. We are here because we enjoy writing and sharing with one another.

    1. manunulat profile image60
      manunulatposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      thanks...your suggestions will help me a lot..will look for grammarly.co..thanks again.. smile

    2. Mohamad Qutait profile image60
      Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      please, can you give any feedback for my research

      1. Jeremy Gill profile image95
        Jeremy Gillposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        I'm not sure whether you're addressing me or Carb, but your profile indicates you don't have any hubs for us to review.

        1. Mohamad Qutait profile image60
          Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 months agoin reply to this
          1. Jeremy Gill profile image95
            Jeremy Gillposted 6 months agoin reply to this

            Hmm, the link gave a "page does not exist message".

            1. Mohamad Qutait profile image60
              Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 months agoin reply to this

              Deleted

              1. Jeremy Gill profile image95
                Jeremy Gillposted 6 months agoin reply to this

                Yikes, please don't post your whole hub. Here's a link to the forum discussing the article:

                https://hubpages.com/community/forum/33 … ost3990647

                1. Mohamad Qutait profile image60
                  Mohamad Qutaitposted 6 months agoin reply to this

                  Thank you so Much, Mr.Jeremy

  3. Jeremy Gill profile image95
    Jeremy Gillposted 7 months ago

    First things first, this article needs to be proofread. We've got many errors (spelling constraints as constraits) and even more awkwardly-worded phrases.

    Examples:
    What hinders you to write?
    It was in high school, I started to feel the urge to writ
    I just wanted to compose and come up with a write-up that would gratify such desire
    All these has common goal

    For some reason, us authors are hesitant to proofread what we've written (perhaps we fear such mistakes), but it truly is essential to forming a well-constructed piece. Other tips I have include being consistent with capsule title capitalization and using less of the passive voice. Best of luck.

    1. manunulat profile image60
      manunulatposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      thanks..very helpful... smile

  4. manunulat profile image60
    manunulatposted 6 months ago

    I have done the suggestions already but still i got the same message... there might be spammy elements... I am not sure if the italicization of phrase or using bullets or having two poll capsules have  something to do with this.

    Please help me out...

    1. manunulat profile image60
      manunulatposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      As of now, I tried to change the italicized to regular font font and also changed bullets to numbers and using the preset format just using regular text and I also removed the 2nd poll capsule. I hope this would make a difference. I am waiting as of the moment for the feedback.

      Keeping my fingers crossed.

      Thanks

    2. Sherry Hewins profile image94
      Sherry Hewinsposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Usually spammy elements means links or Amazon capsules

 
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