I'd like feedback on my Hub: Fitness Inspired : Weight loss for beginners, Exerc

  1. krithi13 profile image72
    krithi13posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Fitness Inspired : Weight loss for beginners, Exercise VS Yourself. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image87
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:

      1) Reword awkward sentences like "Modified push ups, in simple means can be termed as halfway push ups."
      2) Think of a more catchy and clear title.
      3) Be consistent with headings. For example, I'd capitalize every word in the paragraph titled "Beginner's Weight loss Program" rather than leave "loss" lowercase.

      I enjoyed this Hub far more than I expected to; kudos to you and best of luck.

 
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