I'd like feedback on my article: Croatia is a vacation paradise! (Makarska)

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  1. Ivan Horvat profile image60
    Ivan Horvatposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Croatia is a vacation paradise! (Makarska) (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your article is too short and you haven't sourced/cited your photos.

      Also too many exclamation points!

      Have a look at this: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … y-of-a-Hub

      In particular, read this section about halfway down the page: "A Hub on Travel in Vancouver".

      1. Ivan Horvat profile image60
        Ivan Horvatposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks a lot for very useful comments. Yes, I am using too much exclamation points...

  2. pen promulgates profile image53
    pen promulgatesposted 2 years ago

    Hi Ivan,

    Welcome to Hubpages.

    You may want to look at the guidelines first. I find your article very dry.

    Please take out time and go through this faq.


    As you have visited the place, you can personalize the article more by highlighting your experience in detail.

    You can:
    1) Provide maps.
    2) Speak about the climate and the best time to go.
    3) Mention what tourists necessarily need to know and must carry with them.
    4) What they should avoid.

    Also, your hub sounds promotional to specific restaurants and places to visit.

    Hope these help.
    Good luck.

    1. Ivan Horvat profile image60
      Ivan Horvatposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your comments.
      Yes, article is too dry and it should be personalized... Also, I dont want promote restaurants... Will try to do it different way...

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 years ago

    Sorry, but you have broken several HubPage rules, which you will discover if you read the Learning Center, here https://hubpageshelp.com/

    Images have to to be credited and must be free of copyright restrictions.

    Hubs should be a minimum of 700 words long, preferably 1,000 to 1,500.

    Only near-perfect English is accepted.

    Headlines have to be in Title Face.

    1. Ivan Horvat profile image60
      Ivan Horvatposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your comments.
      This is my first article, so I have to work and improve it...
      Kind regards


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