I'd like feedback on my article: Benefits of Steam Cleaning

  1. rox19 profile image59
    rox19posted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Benefits of Steam Cleaning. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image87
      Jeremy Gillposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:

      1) Capitalize key words in headings.
      2) The first half of the articles is very text-heavy. I'd mix it up a bit with a picture or video. Alternatively, break up the points in the biggest paragraph of the first heading using bullets, or move the table from the bottom closer to the top.
      3) Watch for spelling/grammar errors, like "most of the times" should just be "most of the time" and attention is misspelled as "atention."
      4) Some sentences aren't mistakes per se, but are awkwardly worded, like "The idea of steam cleaning is - you using only water, which converts into steam under high pressure."

      From the articles of yours I've read, your two consistent issues are proofreading and capitalizing headings, but thankfully these are easily corrected. Best of luck.

 
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