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I'd like feedback on my article: 5 Pakistani Sites for Pakistan Fashion Week

  1. fashionfunks profile image60
    fashionfunksposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 5 Pakistani Sites for Pakistan Fashion Week (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image89
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Here are two immediate, glaring issues with this Hub:

      1) It has absolutely no photos/videos, making it visually unappealing. You need them, and be sure to spread them throughout.
      2) It's way too short. Might be difficult with this topic, but unless you find a way to extend your writing to 700 words (and more if possible), it's unlikely the Hub will ever be Featured. You're not even close right now.

      Once you're nearer the threshold, if you still aren't Featured, feel free to ask for further help and we can give more-specific tips.

    2. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      You are promoting your own website - it's not permitted.

      HubPages would class the article as 'low quality'.

      1. fashionfunks profile image60
        fashionfunksposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        ok thanks

        1. Jeremy Gill profile image89
          Jeremy Gillposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Even if you weren't, the issues I mentioned would prevent this from ever becoming Featured without extensive editing. If you have any actual interest in writing, review some other Hubs and get a better feel for what's expected.

 
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