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I'd like feedback on my article: 8D - Problem Solving Method

  1. Ajay Lokesha profile image45
    Ajay Lokeshaposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 8D - Problem Solving Method (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image97
      Jeremy Gillposted 8 months agoin reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:

      1) Capitalize all key words in headings.
      2) Remove or alter the poll.
      3) Watch for small errors, for example an extra space before punctuation in the phrase "All the best !"
      4) Style tip: use the em dash (—) instead of a normal dash(-) for emphasis. It can be found in the "Insert Special Character" button in text capsules.

      Best of luck.

      1. Ajay Lokesha profile image45
        Ajay Lokeshaposted 8 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks Jeremy!

        I appreciate your feedback!
        Let me do some improvement.

  2. pen promulgates profile image53
    pen promulgatesposted 8 months ago

    Hey Ajay,
    I don't find your article magazine-style.
    HP is about putting the query in Google and getting answers about it. Perhaps you can work your article and title that way.
    You have underlined too much. That gives hints the rest of your article is of not much importance. Please format it properly.
    Honestly, even after trying hard, I couldn't understand your message. The language is good, but still the message is vague and unclear.
    Hope these help.
    Good luck.

    1. Ajay Lokesha profile image45
      Ajay Lokeshaposted 8 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for the specific feedback !

      This shall help me to further improvise.
      Let's keep in touch.

 
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