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  1. Shivani Gala profile image82
    Shivani Galaposted 2 months ago

    Hey All,

    This Hub used to be one of the most popular hubs for me but now it is unfeatured! Can someone give me what exactly needs to change here? https://hubpages.com/food/Homemade-Kaju … t-dessert-

    Thank you for all your suggestions!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image97
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Here are some suggestions:

      1) Proofread. Fix the grammar and spelling of sentences like "In addition is so easy on your monthly budget that you can teart yourself with them regularly."
      2) Looks a bit too short. Aim for at least 700 words.
      3) Your Amazon capsules aren't personally discussed. I've been hearing of HubPages cracking down on these lately, and I imagine that's why your Hub was unfeatured. Either talk about your personal experience with them or remove them.

      Best of luck.

    2. sallybea profile image99
      sallybeaposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      You are not following the rules for capitalization of your titles - Homemade Kaju Katli Recipe, a Cashew Nut Barfi- Indian Dessert   You can always download a capitalization tool and insert your titles into it so that they come up correctly each time.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    Images must be Creative Commons/Public Domain and cited as to source. You can't just lift pictures off websites.

    As Jeremy noted, there are grammar/spelling problems. Here are some examples:

    In India, mostly every (replace mostly every with most) mouthwatering dishes in (are replaces in) made at home and one doesn’t have to worry about its quality. In addition (it) is so easy on your monthly budget that you can teart (treat) yourself with them regularly.

  3. Responsible Woman profile image80
    Responsible Womanposted 2 months ago

    I have observed the following things shivani,

    1.    There are few spelling mistakes, Just re-check and post the article.
    2.    Increase the length of the article little-bit if possible.
    3.    There are too many combinations of both outgoing and internal links in the article better to avoid too many links and decrease as many as you can.

    Best of luck with your feature hubs smile

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image97
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Haha is it just me, or is this basically the same as my response?

      1. Responsible Woman profile image80
        Responsible Womanposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Haha Maybe same Views smile

        1. Jeremy Gill profile image97
          Jeremy Gillposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Or maybe you copied the exact format and points I made and just rephrased them. From the same three points to my "best of luck" at the end.

          Look, not a big deal with this, but don't get into a habit of plagiarizing. Rephrasing doesn't mean it's not stealing.

          1. Responsible Woman profile image80
            Responsible Womanposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            Thanks for the advice, I should take it as Sportive.

  4. yogaburnclub profile image83
    yogaburnclubposted 2 months ago

    This is a great article but I think the reference looks like self-promotional which is prohibited at Hub page.Avoid many references unless very necessary

 
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