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I'd like feedback on my article: Traveling to Egypt part 1

  1. Ayman Atef profile image61
    Ayman Atefposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Traveling to Egypt part 1 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Ayman,

      Your standard of English is not yet good enough for HubPages. Go and work on it, then come back and try again. I'm sure you can improve it with a little effort.

      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … at-content

      1. Ayman Atef profile image61
        Ayman Atefposted 3 months agoin reply to this

        Could you help me
        What is the wrong?

        1. theraggededge profile image100
          theraggededgeposted 3 months agoin reply to this

          We can help you with minor issues but we can't re-write the whole article for you. HubPages is an English-speaking site aimed at an English-speaking audience. Therefore it requires articles to be written to a high standard. Even if we rewrote the article for you, the next one won't pass.

          Go and improve your skills then come back and try again. You've got this far, you can keep going.

  2. Breelyn Sirk profile image64
    Breelyn Sirkposted 3 months ago

    There are sentences that are missing capitalization. There are a lot of other grammar errors, and there might not be enough text. You should check out the Grammarly app or website to help with English grammar and spelling.

  3. Asanta205 profile image61
    Asanta205posted 3 months ago

    May be

 
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