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I'd like feedback on my article: Traveling to Egypt part 1

  1. Ayman Atef profile image60
    Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Traveling to Egypt part 1 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      Ayman, please stop posting these requests. The problems with your English are still there.

      We have given you feedback an explained what you have to do. Improve your English and then try again.

  2. Ayman Atef profile image60
    Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago

    I dont know where is the wrong
    can you tell me ?

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      It's because you don't understand English. That's what I am trying to explain to you.

      This article will never be approved until you learn how to write English properly.

      I don't know how to say it any clearer.

      1. Ayman Atef profile image60
        Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        Because it is not my primary language
        I speak Arabic
        what can I do
        I have 10 days in this article
        please could you help me
        what can I do

        1. theraggededge profile image95
          theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

          Nothing.

          There's nothing you can do until you learn how to write English properly.

          Is there an Arabic/Egyptian site where you could write in your own language?

          1. Ayman Atef profile image60
            Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

            No
            ok im sorry

            1. theraggededge profile image95
              theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

              You don't need to be sorry. It's good that you want to write smile You could improve in just a few weeks if you try.

              I can only speak one language, so I admire anyone who can speak two or more.

              HubPages isn't only about writing, you also need to learn how the site works, how to format hubs, how to use images properly. When you understand English better, it will be easy for you.

              1. Ayman Atef profile image60
                Ayman Atefposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

                Thanks

 
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