I'd like feedback on my article: How to Generate More Returns with less risk?

  1. HarneetBahri profile image41
    HarneetBahriposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article How to Generate More Returns with less risk? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your article is too general (no, we don't discuss or receive investment advice around the dining table) and too vague. I learned nothing, to be honest.

      Many basic grammatical errors, such as using 'their' instead of 'there'.

      Looks like you are self-promoting a website. HubPages does not allow this. The link leads to a 403 Forbidden page. Not good.

 
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