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I'd like feedback on my article: Journey to Independence: India, Gandhi and...

  1. Prafulla Kasture profile image73
    Prafulla Kastureposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Journey to Independence: India, Gandhi and Non-Violence. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your English is not yet up to the standard required by HubPages. HubPages is aimed at an English-speaking readership, therefore articles need to be grammatically correct.

      Spend some time improving your written English, then come back and try again.

      1. Prafulla Kasture profile image73
        Prafulla Kastureposted 3 months agoin reply to this

        thank you very much for your inputs. i will work on them

  2. writejt profile image80
    writejtposted 3 months ago

    Last paragraph can be given a heading indicating conclusion, perhaps, and the last but one may be give another one, meaning 'lessons learned from his life'.

    1. Prafulla Kasture profile image73
      Prafulla Kastureposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      I appreciate your input

  3. Tanya Campbell profile image71
    Tanya Campbellposted 3 months ago

    Your article is well researched but has quite a number of grammatical errors. Fix them and I think your article will get published.

    1. Prafulla Kasture profile image73
      Prafulla Kastureposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      thank you very much for your inside. I will work on the grammar.

  4. pen promulgates profile image42
    pen promulgatesposted 3 months ago

    Also, as you talk about Gandhi, try using proverbs and thoughts quoted by Gandhiji. I don't think Nelson Mandela's pic is apt for the subject you have chosen.
    The title needs reworking too.
    The two movements you talk about (chauri chaura and the other one) have a unique angle. You can rework your article giving more emphasis to that.
    Saying you believe your Gods are imperfect (having flaws) gives a negative meaning to any reader(s).
    Most important of all, it is the grammar that needs reworking (as pointed out by others).
    Good luck.

    1. Prafulla Kasture profile image73
      Prafulla Kastureposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      hey thanks for your inside I appreciate your suggestion and will work on it

 
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