I'd like feedback on my article: How To Match The Right Fragrance With The...

  1. phanuruch profile image77
    phanuruchposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article How To Match The Right Fragrance With The Occasion (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      I'm sorry, but I found the article a bit boring and self-evident. There aren't any interesting facts about early use of scent, or any fascinating anecdotes or stories. It's very general and dull.

      So, maybe you could spice it up a little? Make it sing off the page. Cause your readers to say, "Wow, I never knew that!" Try it.

      You readers might also like to know what authority or interest you have in the topic, so complete the Author Bio, on the hub, and on your profile too.

      1. phanuruch profile image77
        phanuruchposted 13 days agoin reply to this

        Thanks, you certainly raised up some issues there that I need to address.

 
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