I'd like feedback on my article: An exploration on Relationship Dynamics -...

  1. Yesso profile image74
    Yessoposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process.

    I have added many high-quality photos and video. So please kindly provide feedback on my article An exploration on Relationship Dynamics - Desire V.S. Desperation (must be signed in to view).

    What can I do to improve?


  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 months ago

    The phrase "a couple should always be together out of desire rather than desperation or complacency" appears three times in first few paragraphs.

    "Have you ever meet (met) an older couple who (that) has been married for decades, yet they no longer want to be in the same room with the other person (one another)?"

    "under no circumstances should a couple ever be to (delete to) together out of external obligations and superficial reasons." Again, a repeat of the same sentiment expressed above.

    There are several other grammar errors. Trying running the text through a free program such as Grammarly.

    Images must be Creative Commons licensed and credited as to source.

    1. Yesso profile image74
      Yessoposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you very much! It is much appreciated.