I'd like feedback on my article: Growing up in animal hostiptal

  1. Jerri Dixon profile image61
    Jerri Dixonposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Growing up in animal hostiptal (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      I'm sorry to have to tell you but your writing is not up to the standards required by HubPages.

      Your article is too short. There are many spelling and grammatical errors. There is even a spelling error in the title. Did you not proofread it before you pressed Publish?

      HubPages isn't a blogging site. Writers here are required to produce quality informative articles in a magazine style.

      Spend some time reading the articles in the Learning Center and then decide is this is the best platform for you: