I'd like feedback on my article: 7 Habits to Pick up Vs 7 Habits to Break

  1. Engelta profile image72
    Engeltaposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 7 Habits to Pick up Vs 7 Habits to Break. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Marisa Wright profile image99
    Marisa Wrightposted 3 months ago

    Hi, welcome back to the forums!   

    It looks like you are not up to date with HubPages' recent changes.   

    Firstly, I know HubPages recommended using Callout capsules as headings at one time - but they've changed their mind.  They want us to use ordinary headings again.  Callout capsules are for when you want to highlight a particular sentence. 

    Secondly, you are not using title case in your headings.  There is a tool you can use to check which letters should be capitalized and which shouldn't - I'm sure someone will drop by to provide a link.

    Your numbered items are headings, so they should be bolded and in title case.

  3. tritrain profile image84
    tritrainposted 3 months ago

    It may help to include numbers for which habit a person is on.  I think it could be broken up into two Hubs.  One for habits to pick up, another for habits to break.

    Maybe "7 Habits To Break For Women", since it appears to be written more for women in mind.

    I like it though.  You've clearly put effort into it.  smile

 
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