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I'd like feedback on my article: Zoylo: A Promising Online Healthcare Entity in.

  1. Irfana profile image46
    Irfanaposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Zoylo: A Promising Online Healthcare Entity in India. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Irfana,

      If you are connected to Zoylo in any way, your hub won't be approved. So you need to state up-front that you have no affiliation with the company, otherwise your hub looks like one big advertisement.

      1. Irfana profile image46
        Irfanaposted 3 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you.

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 3 months ago

    Here are some ideas:

    1) Stay consistent with your capitalization of key words in headings.
    2) Proofread and reword awkward sentences like "You can book appointment for yourself or for your loved ones living in a far-off place by entering the location."
    3) Move one of your photos down to enrich the text-heavy end of the Hub.

    Proofreading is key here. If you can get a good grasp of well-constructed and dynamic sentences, your article stands a much better chance. Good luck.

    1. Irfana profile image46
      Irfanaposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much Jeremy Gill. I will do it.

      Regards,
      Irfana

 
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