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I'd like feedback on my article: Zoylo: A Promising Online Healthcare Entity in.

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    Irfanaposted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Zoylo: A Promising Online Healthcare Entity in India. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      Hi Irfana,

      If you are connected to Zoylo in any way, your hub won't be approved. So you need to state up-front that you have no affiliation with the company, otherwise your hub looks like one big advertisement.

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        Irfanaposted 13 days agoin reply to this

        Thank you.

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 13 days ago

    Here are some ideas:

    1) Stay consistent with your capitalization of key words in headings.
    2) Proofread and reword awkward sentences like "You can book appointment for yourself or for your loved ones living in a far-off place by entering the location."
    3) Move one of your photos down to enrich the text-heavy end of the Hub.

    Proofreading is key here. If you can get a good grasp of well-constructed and dynamic sentences, your article stands a much better chance. Good luck.

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      Irfanaposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much Jeremy Gill. I will do it.

      Regards,
      Irfana

 
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