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I'd like feedback on my article: A modern Approach to pairing food and wine

  1. Dave Proctor profile image91
    Dave Proctorposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article A modern Approach to pairing food and wine. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. greenmind profile image97
      greenmindposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi -- cool article, but why only capitalize "Approach" in your title?

  2. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 4 weeks ago

    You have a lot of extra lines between your paragraphs, there should be only one blank line between paragraphs.

    1. Dave Proctor profile image91
      Dave Proctorposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the advice, I will amend it in the morning and resubmit

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    Nice article.

    I'd remove the white space between paragraphs, a single space is best. There are other chunks of white space that should be removed.

    Your title should be in Title Case.

    Images ought to be credited and free of copyright restrictions.

    What goes well with kippers? A young Ghanaian Shiraz? Not that I would eat a kipper anyway; too many bones.

    1. Dave Proctor profile image91
      Dave Proctorposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the advice, I will get on  it in the morning.

      Re: wine to go with kippers. Providing you are not having kippers for breakfast, then  how about a German Spatlase from the Rheinhessen (hopefully better than a Ghanaian Shiraz!)

  4. Rochelle Frank profile image96
    Rochelle Frankposted 4 weeks ago

    Right! As a headline it should say:
    A Modern Approach to Pairing Food and Wine

  5. Dave Proctor profile image91
    Dave Proctorposted 4 weeks ago

    Thanks Rochelle

 
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