I'd like feedback on my article: 12 Everyday Superfoods

  1. stelaligizaki profile image67
    stelaligizakiposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 12 Everyday Superfoods (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Atanas Yonkov profile image86
      Atanas Yonkovposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi Stella,
      I really liked your topic as I am also a big fan of super foods and healthy lifestyle. Your idea is quite good, however, i have some suggestions for you. In your first paragraph, i would like you to elaborate a bit more why you are writing this article. Ask yourself the following questions: Why am I writing this? Why is this subject important? How do I solve my readers' problems.

      Moreover, there is a room for improvements on your styles and grammar. For example, It is nice that you mention Thomas Edison, however, It will be even better if you mention who he was and why you mention him with regard to your topic. Good luck and I hope this helps!

  2. stelaligizaki profile image67
    stelaligizakiposted 2 weeks ago

    Thank you so much for your guidance, Atanas. I find your tips very helpful. Kind Regards, Stella.

 
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