I'd like feedback on my article: Relationship and Commitment

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   Enunwah Morrisposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Relationship and Commitment (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Why on earth have you inserted an Amazon capsule for a luggage lock? It has nothing to do with the topic of your article, and frankly, if my loved one bought me one for Christmas, I would sling it right back at him. It certainly wouldn't 'excite me'.
      
      As far as the content goes, looks like you have copied and pasted directly from here: https://www.bettinahemmingsen.com/commitment--sacrifice
      
      Unless you wrote the original, this is plagiarism: stealing work from other people and pretending you wrote  it. It will get you banned. Nothing makes writers more angry than having their work stolen.
      
      If you did write the original, then you can't republish it here without a substantial re-write. But I'm pretty sure you are not Bettina Hemmingsen, Family Counsellor and Therapist, from Munich, are you?

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         Enunwah Morrisposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Everything I wrote here is the original and I wrote my self I don’t know who Bettina Hemmingsen is I only just shared a link to another writers woke because I felt it would further help my readers. The amazon capsule would be what I need to work on and advertise something related to my post. But my post is original written by me. Thank you

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            theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            Random text from your hub:
            
            Lastly no one should commit to a relationship that cannot meet their needs. Your needs and that of your partner matter and should be part of the overall commitment equation. But life and relationship can be complicated, there will be stretches or phases where your partner does not meet your needs. Commitment is what will get you through these rough ohases (sic) enabling each other to get back to meet each other’s needs once again.
            
            Text from https://www.bettinahemmingsen.com/commitment--sacrifice
            
            No one should commit to a relationship that cannot meet their needs. Your needs (and your partner's needs) do matter and should be part of the overall commitment equation. But life and relationships are complicated, and there will be stretches of time when your partner does not meet your needs (and you will not meet your partner's needs). Commitment is what will get you through those rough stretches, enabling each of you to get back on track in meeting each other's needs once again.
            
            So how do you explain that? Looks like you tried substituting a couple of words, hence the typo.
            
            Edit: Your other hub also contains copied material. In fact, it's word for word.
            
            http://www.firstpost.com/sports/champio … 54323.html
            
            I've reported that one too.

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               TIMETRAVELER2posted 7 years agoin reply to this

               You Go Girl!  I hate plagiarists!

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