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I'd like feedback on my article : The bad effects of the internet

  1. F 96 profile image61
    F 96posted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article and how to improve it .The bad effects of the internet (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. AliciaC profile image100
    AliciaCposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi, F 96. The problems mentioned by Rupert in response to your previous request for help still exist.

    The title of the article should be written in title case.

    There shouldn't be a space before a punctuation mark (period or full stop, comma, and question mark).

    The italics in the article should be replaced with normal text.

    In addition, there are grammar errors in the article.

    1. Michael-Duncan profile image92
      Michael-Duncanposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      AliciaC is right. Run the article through a proper spellchecker like Grammarly to fix the errors that appear on nearly every line. Correct the punctuation and seek some assistance with sentence construction. Then you should be good to go.

      1. F 96 profile image61
        F 96posted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

        Ok I will do these changes and publish it again

    2. F 96 profile image61
      F 96posted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      I will work more on it thanks

 
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