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I'd like feedback on my article: Our God is Limitless!

  1. The Stages Of ME profile image64
    The Stages Of MEposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Our God is Limitless!. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marketing Merit profile image96
      Marketing Meritposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Your article does not make for easy reading. Google 'Flesch Kincaid,' for online tools that will help you improve readability.

      1. The Stages Of ME profile image64
        The Stages Of MEposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

        Dear Marketing Merit,
        When I put the URL in the Flesch Kincaid it scored grade 7. What should I be reaching for in grade level? Thanks for taking time to help me.

        1. Marketing Merit profile image96
          Marketing Meritposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

          Copy and paste your text into the hemingwayapp online. This tells you where improvements can be made and also gives you the rating for specific grades. Hope this helps.

          1. The Stages Of ME profile image64
            The Stages Of MEposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

            Wow you read my mind I was doing that. What level should we shoot for on Hub? smile

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi, Kathy. Here are some ideas:

    1) Capitalize key words in headings.
    2) Reword the occasional awkward sentence such as "The best way to becoming our best selves is to go to God..."
    3) Perhaps this is too radical a change, but I've always been a fan of lists as they readily divide Hubs into manageable chunks. "5 Reasons God is Limitless" or "6 Examples of God's Limitlessness" or such might help grab readers.
    4) Caption rather than title photo capsules.

    Best of luck.

    1. The Stages Of ME profile image64
      The Stages Of MEposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thank you Jeremy I will get proofing any suggestions on editing tools. Online software free or for a fee?

    2. The Stages Of ME profile image64
      The Stages Of MEposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thank you Jeremy smile

  3. The Stages Of ME profile image64
    The Stages Of MEposted 3 weeks ago

    Thank you very much for the tips.

 
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