I'd like feedback on my article: Top Five Popular Orthodox Traditions from India

  1. Deepika ojha profile image54
    Deepika ojhaposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Top Five Popular Orthodox Traditions from India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    I can see you've put a lot of work into this article but the reality is your command of written English is quite poor. HubPages requires that submissions be in near-perfect English, but this article is filled with numerous errors of sentence construction, wrong choice of words, and punctuation.

    1. Robert Sacchi profile image83
      Robert Sacchiposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      The English errors do take away from this interesting article about bizarre rituals performed in various parts of India.  I am an American and Mr. Taylor is Canadian you may want to have some of your friends read the article and give feedback.  How English is spoken and written in North America may be different than how it is done in the subcontinent.

 
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