I'd like feedback on my article: Ooty- The Queen of Hill Stations

  1. Sanchaita profile image66
    Sanchaitaposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Ooty- The Queen of Hill Stations (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hello there,

      Your article seems to be a thin rewrite of many similar articles on the web. Some sections look as if they are copied and pasted.

      Do you think it's worth your time and effort to be competing with older, more authoritative sites? You have added nothing personal or unique to the information already available.

      Think about writing something original that no-one else has written, or perhaps approach a well-known topic from your unique perspective.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    There are grammar errors, in particular one that is common among submissions from the Indian sub-continent - the omission of definite "the" and indefinite "a" articles.

    You should eliminate the bold face and a lot of the white space.

    Images are important and need to be included. They must be free of copyright restrictions.

 
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