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I want to improve the phraseology of my sentences in my article.

  1. Aman Ullah Ghazi profile image61
    Aman Ullah Ghaziposted 13 days ago

    Suggest me any web or youtube videos.

    1. sarahspradlin profile image93
      sarahspradlinposted 13 days agoin reply to this
    2. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      Can you use Google?

      Part of a writer's job is to research, so go research smile

  2. Aman Ullah Ghazi profile image61
    Aman Ullah Ghaziposted 13 days ago

    By the way I think your job is to just bully everyone who come on this forum. "Apprenticeship Alum".

    1. Marisa Wright profile image98
      Marisa Wrightposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      No, her job is to

      (a) offer advice and encouragement to new members who have the potential to be successful on HubPages, and

      (b) to provide an honest assessment to new members whose English is so bad, they're wasting their time on HubPages.

      HubPages demands a high standard of English.  There are plenty of other sites that aren't so fussy, go find them.

    2. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      I'm a bully, am I? Thanks so much for that summing up of my character.

      My point is that you want to be a writer, right? Writers are curious folk who try to solve their own problems. Why would you expect anyone here to be able to provide you with the information you require, which will, by necessity, be geared to your personal needs?

      So... you know where Youtube is, go find the information yourself. That's not bullying, it's a common sense suggestion. Take it or leave it. I doubt if anyone else here is prepared to spoon-feed you.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image99
    FatFreddysCatposted 13 days ago

    theraggededge with a cinder block for the win. (CRUNCH)

 
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