I'd like feedback on my article: The role of Sociology in business world (for...

  1. rjbilalkhan profile image70
    rjbilalkhanposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The role of Sociology in business world (for managers and leaders) (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. greenmind profile image96
      greenmindposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Hi -- you have clearly learned a lot and thought a lot about this subject. It seems to me that your article would be more useful to readers if you offered examples and real-life situations in which the methods and ideas of sociology might be used.
      You should also consider adding royalty-free images from a site like pixabay.com to give your work more visual appeal.
      Finally, your headline needs to be re-written. The capitalization is off and it's generally hard to understand.

      1. rjbilalkhan profile image70
        rjbilalkhanposted 3 months agoin reply to this

        I really appreciate your support and help regarding my article and I will soon update this article with the suggested changes.
        Thanks and Best Regards

 
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