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   Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

   http://hubpages.com/profile/Crazdwriter
   
   I did get some advice from Dohn but I was hoping that others can now read my new profile and give me tips. Love ya guys and I hope you like the new profile.

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      prettydarkhorseposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      hi, You can be what you want to be as long as you are persistent and I think you are that kind of person. Anyhow if you will not be successful at least you have tried.Bless you on your endeavor...

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      rebekahELLEposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      crazd, I reread it and found a few places you may want to reword it. 
      
      ..."hope one day will be books in bookstores and on bookshelves in peoples homes."
      
      the unemployment sentence could be left out imo.  and then delete the word, But, and start the sentence " I have..."
      
      "Everyone here is special and has..."   Everyone is plural.
      
      hope this helps.

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      Daniel Carterposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Angel of mercy in a red dress!! Love the wings! (At least that's what looks like is behind you...)
      
      Nice profile. No critique from me. Me gusta mucho, chica.
      
      Glad you're still here, btw. I read the thread about you possibly leaving, and wanted to reply but I was busy wallowing in self pity. So glad to know I have company at times. LOL
      
      Looking forward to many good reads....
      

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   Wonder_Womanposted 13 years ago

   Very sexy

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   Eaglekiwiposted 13 years ago

   CW it is a sexy pic ,but Im not sure if thats the image you want to portray as an author/writer.
   
   If it feels like you then by all means stand by it. Ya just might attract traffic thats not gonna click  is all.
   
   ps Great legs

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      Jane@CMposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      I have to agree, if it is the male audience your after, then go for it.

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   Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

   it wasn't the picture guys I changed my profile I was hoping you guys would read what I wrote...thanks and I am just posting this pic for October because it's Halloween

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      bloodnlatexposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Your new profile is good.  I would change the part about being unemployed around to be a bit more positive.  Perhaps mentioning that since you have been unemployed, you have enjoyed having the time to focus more on your writing while looking for a new job. You might want to run it through a spellcheck as well.  Just a few ideas.

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      Eaglekiwiposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Ok cool , BOO!! then lol

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      Gemsongposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Sure you are. Yeah right.

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   Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

   Thak you blood I will do just that. I appreciate the help

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      bloodnlatexposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      I'm here to help!!

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   lynnechandlerposted 13 years ago

   Love the pic but the extraneous kitchen etc is distracting so if you want to use one for Halloween then maybe find one focused more on just you.
   
   The profile is good and BNL addressed the issue I had with the unemployment. The other thing is in the last paragraph you are talking about the other hubbers here that people may enjoy something about the paragraph sounds off to me. Read it aloud to yourself and see if it could be phrased better.
   
   Other than that super job.

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   Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

   thanks Lynne I'll go back and read the last paragraph and hopefully get it sounding right lol sounded right in my head dang it haha.
   and that is the only pic i have at the moment...I could crop it better then

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      rebekahELLEposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      you look nice, but cropping is a good idea. great job with info, definitely do a spell check, a few errors. and then you get busy writing, you have a talent.

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   Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

   I'm going to fix the picutre now but I did fix the last paragraph hope it sounds better lol

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   lynnechandlerposted 13 years ago

   If you have enjoyed reading these, you will hopefully also enjoy reading my other hubs.  If you see a link on the bottom of any of my hubs, by al means click on it and you will be granted the pleasure of other hubbers with a great passion for writing.  Everyone on here are special and have a unique voice all of their own. Enjoy not just my hubs but everyone else's hubs as well on every topic you can think of from poetry to fiction stories, religion to politics, and computers to other technology.  Please take the time to not just read my hubs but other hubbers hubs, they are all great writers and I know you won't be disappointed.
   
   First sentence all is spelled wrong and and the second sentence is the one that sounds off to me. Everyone are might would sound better Everyone of them are special to me and have a unique voice all their own.
   
   And yes crop the pic that would make it more you. You could leave the oven and just get rid of the doorway. That way it looks like you are cooking up something witchy. LOL

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    Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

    Thanks for the help guys I want it to look good lol

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    Crazdwriterposted 13 years ago

    Thanks Daniel and yes those are wings but not an angel lmao
    
    If you have ever heard of Amy Brown? I am The Brat by Amy Brown. I love her art work. I have a link up on one of my hubs about her too
    
    and yep dude you are not alone, D, not alone.

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       Daniel Carterposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Then I have another hub to read. I'll get on it asap.
       

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          Crazdwriterposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          I haven't made one all on her like I wil soon but It is in the hub marked the Magical World of Fairies and it only mentions her for a second but I did add her website at the end

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