My Fist Hub

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   jdavidsaposted 13 years ago

   Hi everyone:
   
   First I like to congratulation to everyone that had been sucessful in this area.
   Also I like to discovered friends
   
   Please I need your help. I am very open for Criticals and tips
   
   Thank you for your time

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      awareposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      6 weeks one hub  . misspell every word thats cool with me . crud a hub with every word misspelled is my idea . try this think and write every word that comes to mind in order stop at lets say 40 words . random words in your head. no sentence no structure  no punctuation .

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         Sue Adamsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         jdavidsa was asking for help, not to be made fun of. I read her hub and understood it perfectly. How can a person improve their English with intolerant people like you. Or do you think only native English speakers have something interesting to say?

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            TINA Vposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            Sue, I agree with you. No offense to others but constructive feedback is very important to new hubbers.  I look forward that old writers can encourage new members to improve and continue with their hub.
            jdavidsa, I will post my comment on your hub. Good bless you and your family.

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         Newsclipperposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Actually, that sounds like something I would try. I wrote an entire hub where every single word starts with either an A, B or C. It was fun!

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   Jackson Riddleposted 13 years ago

   I would go back and iron out all your grammar mistakes, namely the one in the title of your hub.

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   Sue Adamsposted 13 years ago

   Actually that one is a spelling mistake.

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      HealthTipposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Which is bad grammar !

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   hudsonj1994posted 13 years ago

   It's not too bad. I would change the last part so its not underlined

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   Marisa Wrightposted 13 years ago

   I saw the heading to this thread and my mind boggled - a "fist Hub"????! 
   
   Oh thank goodness, you meant "first Hub".
   
   Is English your first language?  The grammar and spelling is well below the standard you need if you want to be successful here on HubPages.  Try pasting it into Word (or some other word-processing program with a spell checker and grammar checker), and run the checks.

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   camloposted 13 years ago

   I must agree, the English is not good ... But the subject is interesting. A photo might be a good idea

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   Flightkeeperposted 13 years ago

   You can make it right by unpublishing your first hub and writing a hub about fists.
   
   

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      zadrobiposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Hehehe I must say I was intrigued when I saw "fist" hub

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         Flightkeeperposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Zad, what are we going to do with you?!

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   beefsteakcharliesposted 13 years ago

   I must admit i, too, was drawn in to this thread by the promise of fist use

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   retellectposted 13 years ago

   Um, needs a hell of alot of work! I thought it was a hub about "fists" too! The person probably used a translate tool or something.

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    retellectposted 13 years ago

    Might just be a clever way of getting loads of attention. Get the traffic first and then re-write it to a hub about fists. Something don't look right here

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       Sue Adamsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Have you taken the trouble to read the hub?
       Give her a break man!

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          Redneckmanposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          Why should he, shes been here 6 weeks and hes been here only 2 weeks and obviously learnt stuff, too many expect to be spoonfed instead of actually taking the trouble to learn.

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    CabinGirl.posted 13 years ago

    Ooops sorry I thought this was a Fist hub

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       Sue Adamsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       You lot are so cruel. Reminds me of the French kids at primary school who bullied me for being a foreigner. Has it never crossed your minds that you might learn something new from someone like jdavidsa?

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    Ron Montgomeryposted 13 years ago

    Hub about fisting?

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       Sue Adamsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       That's right, take the micky.

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          Ron Montgomeryposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          Who is Micky?

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             Sue Adamsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

             English expression for making fun of
             
             Yes you are funny but at the expense of someone else and that ain't nice. Be nice if you can't be beautiful (French saying).

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                Ron Montgomeryposted 13 years agoin reply to this

                But I'm both.  I'm sure the OP understands its all in fun.

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    Sue Adamsposted 13 years ago

    Sorry but who is OP?

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       Ron Montgomeryposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Micky's evil twin.
       
       O riginal
       P oster

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          Sue Adamsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          Oh OK. You are obviously an experienced poster on forums. The OP however is not getting very much out of all this.  Go on, go and read her first hub. You might learn something.

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    retellectposted 13 years ago

    "Micky's evil twin.  "
    
    ROFL
    
    Sue, she has been here 6 weeks and she's only wrote one hub. It needs alot of work and if she can't type in proper English then use a site with her native language until she is confident enough NOT to make such simple mistakes. Remember that every bad hub brings down the rest, why should the rest suffer?

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