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My Fist Hub

  1. jdavidsa profile image49
    jdavidsaposted 8 years ago

    Hi everyone:

    First I like to congratulation to everyone that had been sucessful in this area.
    Also I like to discovered friends

    Please I need your help. I am very open for Criticals and tips

    Thank you for your time

    1. aware profile image70
      awareposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      6 weeks one hub  . misspell every word thats cool with me . crud a hub with every word misspelled is my idea . try this think and write every word that comes to mind in order stop at lets say 40 words . random words in your head. no sentence no structure  no punctuation .

      1. Sue Adams profile image95
        Sue Adamsposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        jdavidsa was asking for help, not to be made fun of. I read her hub and understood it perfectly. How can a person improve their English with intolerant people like you. Or do you think only native English speakers have something interesting to say?

        1. TINA V profile image79
          TINA Vposted 8 years agoin reply to this

          Sue, I agree with you. No offense to others but constructive feedback is very important to new hubbers.  I look forward that old writers can encourage new members to improve and continue with their hub.
          jdavidsa, I will post my comment on your hub. Good bless you and your family.

      2. Newsclipper profile image77
        Newsclipperposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Actually, that sounds like something I would try. I wrote an entire hub where every single word starts with either an A, B or C. It was fun!

  2. Jackson Riddle profile image55
    Jackson Riddleposted 8 years ago

    I would go back and iron out all your grammar mistakes, namely the one in the title of your hub.

  3. Sue Adams profile image95
    Sue Adamsposted 8 years ago

    Actually that one is a spelling mistake.

    1. profile image44
      HealthTipposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Which is bad grammar !

  4. hudsonj1994 profile image60
    hudsonj1994posted 8 years ago

    It's not too bad. I would change the last part so its not underlined

  5. Marisa Wright profile image97
    Marisa Wrightposted 8 years ago

    I saw the heading to this thread and my mind boggled - a "fist Hub"????! 

    Oh thank goodness, you meant "first Hub".

    Is English your first language?  The grammar and spelling is well below the standard you need if you want to be successful here on HubPages.  Try pasting it into Word (or some other word-processing program with a spell checker and grammar checker), and run the checks.

  6. camlo profile image88
    camloposted 8 years ago

    I must agree, the English is not good ... But the subject is interesting. A photo might be a good idea

  7. Flightkeeper profile image74
    Flightkeeperposted 8 years ago

    You can make it right by unpublishing your first hub and writing a hub about fists.

    wink

    1. zadrobi profile image58
      zadrobiposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Hehehe I must say I was intrigued when I saw "fist" hub

      1. Flightkeeper profile image74
        Flightkeeperposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Zad, what are we going to do with you?!

  8. beefsteakcharlies profile image53
    beefsteakcharliesposted 8 years ago

    I must admit i, too, was drawn in to this thread by the promise of fist use

  9. retellect profile image80
    retellectposted 8 years ago

    Um, needs a hell of alot of work! I thought it was a hub about "fists" too! The person probably used a translate tool or something.

  10. retellect profile image80
    retellectposted 8 years ago

    Might just be a clever way of getting loads of attention. Get the traffic first and then re-write it to a hub about fists. Something don't look right here smile

    1. Sue Adams profile image95
      Sue Adamsposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Have you taken the trouble to read the hub?
      Give her a break man!

      1. profile image44
        Redneckmanposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Why should he, shes been here 6 weeks and hes been here only 2 weeks and obviously learnt stuff, too many expect to be spoonfed instead of actually taking the trouble to learn.

  11. profile image45
    CabinGirl.posted 8 years ago

    Ooops sorry I thought this was a Fist hub smile

    1. Sue Adams profile image95
      Sue Adamsposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      You lot are so cruel. Reminds me of the French kids at primary school who bullied me for being a foreigner. Has it never crossed your minds that you might learn something new from someone like jdavidsa?

  12. Ron Montgomery profile image60
    Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago

    Hub about fisting?

    1. Sue Adams profile image95
      Sue Adamsposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      That's right, take the micky.

      1. Ron Montgomery profile image60
        Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Who is Micky?

        1. Sue Adams profile image95
          Sue Adamsposted 8 years agoin reply to this

          big_smile English expression for making fun of

          Yes you are funny but at the expense of someone else and that ain't nice. Be nice if you can't be beautiful (French saying).

          1. Ron Montgomery profile image60
            Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years agoin reply to this

            But I'm both.  I'm sure the OP understands its all in fun.

  13. Sue Adams profile image95
    Sue Adamsposted 8 years ago

    Sorry but who is OP?

    1. Ron Montgomery profile image60
      Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Micky's evil twin. wink

      O riginal
      P oster

      1. Sue Adams profile image95
        Sue Adamsposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Oh OK. You are obviously an experienced poster on forums. The OP however is not getting very much out of all this.  Go on, go and read her first hub. You might learn something.

  14. retellect profile image80
    retellectposted 8 years ago

    "Micky's evil twin.  wink"

    ROFL big_smile

    Sue, she has been here 6 weeks and she's only wrote one hub. It needs alot of work and if she can't type in proper English then use a site with her native language until she is confident enough NOT to make such simple mistakes. Remember that every bad hub brings down the rest, why should the rest suffer?

 
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