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I feel my hub is missing something or just doesn't feel right...Sugges

  1. N. Ramius profile image67
    N. Ramiusposted 8 years ago

    Does anyone see what it is or what I'm missing or is it all in my head?

    http://hubpages.com/hub/How-to-Play-Citadels-Card-Game

    1. jacobkuttyta profile image78
      jacobkuttytaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I also recommend what Marisa Wright said

  2. Marisa Wright profile image98
    Marisa Wrightposted 7 years ago

    As someone who's never played the game, I expected to read an introduction to how the game is played, and what the objective is, under "Basics" - instead I get how the game ends, before I even know whether it's a card game or a computer game.

    Remember to make your first text capsule large enough to trigger the top right hand corner Adsense (assuming you're signed up) - or put an eBay or Amazon capsule there.  Move your picture further down.  The top right hand corner is the prime spot to attract clicks.

  3. N. Ramius profile image67
    N. Ramiusposted 7 years ago

    Reworked the hub and I think it flows better now. Your opinions? Suggestions on anything I missed?

  4. Marisa Wright profile image98
    Marisa Wrightposted 7 years ago

    Yes, much better - now I understand what the game is about!

    I did a quick search on Youtube and came up with heaps of clips on Citadel.  Videos keep readers on your Hub for longer, which Google likes, so they're worth adding. Your ad is a bit text-heavy so some clips would really help.

 
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