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Will someone show pity on a first time writer?

  1. jonesgirl71 profile image59
    jonesgirl71posted 7 years ago

    I have just finished my first short story,really need feedback from an experience writer. Anyone feel like being entertained?

    1. DogSiDaed profile image59
      DogSiDaedposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I wouldn't say I'm hugely experienced, but I'd like to read some anyway... is it up on one of your hubs?

    2. Cagsil profile image60
      Cagsilposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      You can post a link here in Extreme Hub Makeover. Please provide the link for it?

      Thank you. big_smile

    3. jonesgirl71 profile image59
      jonesgirl71posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I am searching for a special person. I have not yet post, portions of the book online.

  2. AEvans profile image79
    AEvansposted 7 years ago

    Which one is it I would love to read it. smile

  3. Shadesbreath profile image84
    Shadesbreathposted 7 years ago

    Where is it?

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    lyricsingrayposted 7 years ago

    Also you ask for pity but want criticism, I don't think those two mix.  I think you'll find, without asking, Hubbers here are extremely considerate and honest in their feedback.  Asking to take pity sets yourself up for the exact opposite.   And we do need a link to the work your referring to.

    Thank you.

    1. jonesgirl71 profile image59
      jonesgirl71posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I don't really need pity, just some constuctive critism, but hey it caught your attention.

  5. shazwellyn profile image45
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    I looked at your Christmas hub. I dont suppose this is the one you want critism about? 

    Well... for this one...

    You need it longer.
    A picture or two.
    More spacing in the paragraphs.

    This is my input.. I am sure you will get there...I am learning still and wouldnt say that I am in a position to tell you anymore, but this is what I have learned, so I hope passing it to you will help.  Try not to worry x

 
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