I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Steve Bannon Calls Ivanka Trump A Rat. What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Hello, a few basic things to start off:
1) Caption your photos; also, spread more throughout your article.
2) Wayyy too long of a text block. Use headings to separate text into manageable chunks.
Implement these to begin with. Best of luck.
Do you have permission to use the image of Ivanka?
Large blocks of type are a real turn-off.
Your article has no evergreen quality; it will become very stale quickly.
And, the English is convoluted and difficult to follow
"Even sensitive information sometimes manages problematic situations by distancing the executive branch by exercising unpredictable messages to solicit a response by testing the President's agenda." I'm not sure what that means
"What is even more disgusting is how Trump’s imperial family has become a competing aristocratic ceremonial expansion of branding Ivanka Trump." Again, what?
You state that all presidents want an open administration. Where's your evidence for that claim?
It is spun to the point of being incomprehensible, although the American public and their concubines probably would not care.
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