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I'd like feedback on my article: Breakaway Cat Collar

  1. RuthCoffee profile image90
    RuthCoffeeposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Breakaway Cat Collar. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    I'm so sorry to be posting again! I'm requesting feedback as to what I need to do to improve this article so that it will be "featured".

    1. Natalie Frank profile image97
      Natalie Frankposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Why are there comments from 8 years ago?  The article seems like it could be viewed as a glorified ad since the link you provide and state is to purchase supplies to make the collar with is a site to actually buy a number of different types of actual breakaway collars.  Start by taking out the link and see what happens.

      1. RuthCoffee profile image90
        RuthCoffeeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for the response. The comments are 8 years old because it is an old Squidoo "lens" that has been sitting here for years and I wanted to do something with it (or delete it)

        1. Natalie Frank profile image97
          Natalie Frankposted 2 months agoin reply to this

          You're welcome.  I think you probably don't want to point out it's 8 years old with the comments.  Address what was suggested then maybe hide them (I can't tell if you've already hidden them since I'm on my phone).  Goid luck with the article and with your future work.  I'll look forward to reading others articles you write.

  2. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 2 months ago

    Ruth, your articles are interesting and there is no reason that you should not have well over a million page views here on HP. Do you recall RupertĀ“s suggestion to use larger images in your Mulberry article? If someone takes the time to make suggestions, and you do not bother to change the article around, it seems like you do not want to get any more page views.
    theraggededge also made some great suggestions to improve traffic to your outside cat article. Changing a few things around and passing QAP is no guarantee that your traffic is going to improve.

    1. RuthCoffee profile image90
      RuthCoffeeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Oh yes, I recall the suggestion and I've been trying to do that. There were one or two on my Mulberry article I did not use larger photos on simply because they are old photos and I don't have them any longer. Nothing larger to use. (I lived there some years ago) That was an old article I wrote several year ago on Squidoo that transferred over and I was just trying to get it "up to speed". sad All suggestions are appreciated and I'm following them whenever I can.

 
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