I'd like feedback on my article: The strongest kinds of hawks

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    khaled amenposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The strongest kinds of hawks (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. lovetherain profile image81
      lovetherainposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      You need a lot more written content, the recommended is at least 700 or more words.

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        khaled amenposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        I can write the other kinds
        But i don't want to write too much

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          khaled amenposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          If you can help me with my articles
          I have more than 8 articles
          If you can help me to make them acceptable
          I can provide excellent topics for you
          I get my information from different sources in different languages

          1. lovetherain profile image81
            lovetherainposted 11 months agoin reply to this

            I also didn't see a source for your pictures. That might be a problem.

        2. lovetherain profile image81
          lovetherainposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          If you want it to get featured, you may need to write more. Content is king.

        3. theraggededge profile image98
          theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          But you say on your profile that you're a content writer. A content writer who doesn't want to write. I see a little problem there.

          Hubpages is probably not the right place for you.

  2. psycheskinner profile image84
    psycheskinnerposted 11 months ago

    Your hub contains no useful content..  The pictures seem to be infringing copyright and your title is not in title case.  I suggest you think of something you can write 500 really informative words on and start over.

  3. Gregory DeVictor profile image95
    Gregory DeVictorposted 11 months ago

    I don’t mean to be rude, but your grammar is repugnant. Here is one example from your article: “The best Falcons we will tell you the best kinds of hawks in this article”

    Sentences must be followed by some sort of punctuation marker such as a period or question mark. You did not even insert a period at the end of your sentence.

    Remember, HubPages has exceptionally high standards, and that includes grammar.

  4. FatFreddysCat profile image97
    FatFreddysCatposted 11 months ago

    Anything I could add at this point would just be piling on, so I'll just say "yeah, what they said."

  5. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 11 months ago

    Obviously you haven't even glanced at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

    If you had you wold realize your offering is completely unacceptable.

    1. DrMark1961 profile image97
      DrMark1961posted 11 months agoin reply to this

      You mean to say it is NOT okay to include badly photoshopped stolen photos? Geez, now I am going to have to go back and delete a bunch of stuff.


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