I'd like feedback on my article: Diet Foods To Binge On This Summer

  1. krithi13 profile image57
    krithi13posted 2 weeks ago

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  2. marcuscaine profile image92
    marcuscaineposted 2 weeks ago

    "A balanced diet is the one which should be focussed." - focused not focussed

    "Again this must not be misunderstood ( not starvation ). Including foods which are high in fiber, low in carbs and high in protein can help the body to build the muscle mass". - This does not mean that you should starve yourself, instead you should eat foods that are high in fiber, high in protein and low in carbs in order to burn fat and build muscle mass

    "Now its high time to change this trend. Let us have a look at some of the delicious salad recipes:" -Now it is time to change this trend, let us look at some of these delicious salad recipes. Its is possessive.  It's is a conjuction for it is.