I'd like feedback on my article: How Are Diet And Exercise Related To Each Other

  1. krithi13 profile image59
    krithi13posted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article How Are Diet And Exercise Related To Each Other (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 7 weeks ago

    "One word at last. Don't let the food scare me. There are certain boundaries I have to set for everything but it should not take away the bliss and joy of that particular thing. Restrict me upon a thing up to an extent, but not in a way that its essence is lost!"
    What are you saying here? You need to delete this and rephrase it.
    There are numerous other spelling and grammatical errors. This could benefit from a good proofread.
    This information is also old and rehashed. Even if you do pass QAP, why should the search engines place your article on the front page? Where is the vital new information?

 
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