I'd like feedback on my article: Woman's Day

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  1. Ilhamelhamdaoui profile image61
    Ilhamelhamdaouiposted 6 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Woman's Day (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    1. greenmind profile image96
      greenmindposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Yes your English is rough. But the message of this article is wonderful. I completely agree with what you're saying here.

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      1. Ilhamelhamdaoui profile image61
        Ilhamelhamdaouiposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks for your advice

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  2. Jeremy Gill profile image95
    Jeremy Gillposted 6 years ago

    We've got lots of work to do here. Here are some tips:

    1) Your title is too short; try to be more specific. What exactly about Women's Day are you covering?
    2) Avoid using periods in your title capsules, especially when you stop doing so halfway down (be consistent).
    3) Caption your photos and find images with larger pixel counts.
    4) We're told to avoid titling our endings "conclusion".
    5) Word count looks much too low. Shoot for 700, and more if possible.

    Have you mastered English? I hate to say it, but awkward sentences like "Is the allocation of one day honor them or humiliate them" just aren't going to fly; much proofreading is needed. Good luck to you.

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  3. Ilhamelhamdaoui profile image61
    Ilhamelhamdaouiposted 6 years ago

    Thanks a lot for your advices.

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  4. psycheskinner profile image78
    psycheskinnerposted 6 years ago

    The day is called "International Women's Day"

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    1. Ilhamelhamdaoui profile image61
      Ilhamelhamdaouiposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks i knew that but i wanted only to abreviate the title.

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      1. psycheskinner profile image78
        psycheskinnerposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        You left off one word and spelled the other incorrectly.  This will not help people interested in the subject of your hub find it, especially as they way you spelled it is the name of an American magazine.

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        1. Ilhamelhamdaoui profile image61
          Ilhamelhamdaouiposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Ok thanks i will take your advice in consideration and   iam going now 
          To change it. But what is your point of view about the content.

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