I'd like feedback on my article: Key Features Of Saree

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    boutiquewalaposted 7 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Key Features Of Saree (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    1. theraggededge profile image75
      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      You are not allowed to use HubPages to promote your business.

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        boutiquewalaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        not promoting any business,

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        1. FatFreddysCat profile image60
          FatFreddysCatposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          Suuuuure you aren't.

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  2. Sherry H profile image91
    Sherry Hposted 7 years ago

    Your first link opens to a website selling sarees. That is promoting a business even if you did not mean to do so.

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  3. daydreams profile image74
    daydreamsposted 7 years ago

    I think people might assume the links you have are promoting a business whether or not you are...

    Some of the phrasing is awkward. I would read through it and try and see if you can simplify some of the sentences and avoid repeating the same words. There is a tool called the Hemingway App that might help.

    If you want the article to do well, you probably need to write more too.

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  4. blueheron profile image92
    blueheronposted 7 years ago

    There are some errors in spelling and usage: "motive" should be "motif," and warm clothes make you feel "cozy" in cool weather, not hot weather.

    Also, I have always seen this garment spelled "sari." There are probably acceptable alternate spellings, but I think "sari" is the most common.

    That said, I would like to see more detail. For example, I have no idea how you wrap a sari. What are the exact dimensions?

    It would be good to provide illustrations of the various styles you mention, tell how saris are made and embroidered, and where you can buy them.

    Some people might even be interested in making saris. I've always thought they were beautiful and could see myself swanning around the house billowing clouds of Shalimar in one. Are there simple "everyday" styles? Like for working in the garden? Where would I wear a sari?

    Are sewing patterns available for choli? Illustrations of different styles of choli would be nice.

    I think you just need lots more detail that would engage the reader.

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