I'd like feedback on my article: How Digital Marketing Can Boost Small Business.

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   Vijay Rathiposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   I request..please help me out someone.
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article How Digital Marketing Can Boost Small Business in India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

   You can't use HubPages to promote a business. That's simply not allowed here.

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   Lea Clarkposted 7 years ago

   It doesn't appear to me that you're supporting a specific business. However, there are several grammatical errors and phrases that should be better defined or rewritten for better understanding. One phrase needs to be translated into English. I'm still a newbie here, and I don't fully understand understand what the auto-filters are looking for, but correcting these things may be helpful.

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   psycheskinnerposted 7 years ago

   It's spammy, the link from "digital marketing" to Dexus is clearly to try and increase that company's search engine rank for that term.

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   Vijay Rathiposted 7 years ago

   I think i can use one hyperlink

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   Vijay Rathiposted 7 years ago

   And i didnt get spammy notification..i get improvement requirement.

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      psycheskinnerposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Nevertheless, it breaks that rule also.  Even when you use only one link, it cannot be to promote a business you have an association with.

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   Vijay Rathiposted 7 years ago

   https://hubpages.com/business/how-digit … s-in-india
   
   Please check.it is ok now

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Nope, you've put the link in the image capsule and the image itself is also self-promotional.
      
      It's against HubPages Terms of Service. https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … d_22732854
      
      Text should be broken up into multiple capsules. There are many grammatical errors and clumsy sentence structure throughout. For example:
      
      "When a site page is optimized all the post content off updated by off page or on page tricks can grab the attention of more customers."
      
      HubPages is a writer's site, not a marketer's platform.

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   Vijay Rathiposted 7 years ago

   removed

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   paperfacetsposted 7 years ago

   Think of an article on HubPages as information separate from your business. You can not mention your business. All your graphics look too promotional, as well. Your goal through HP is not to link, but to have more exposure on the Internet as a whole.
   
   Run on sentences and too many listed items make the reading difficult. Ex.  "The Internet is considered the most common means of digital marketing others are mobile instant messaging, podcasts text messaging, electronic billboards, mobile apps, radio channels, digital television etc."
   
   Consider saying only: "The Internet is considered the most common means of digital marketing." Many other sentences are similar.
   
   If your audience is only going to be India you may want to reconsider starting on HP's. If you have advise for small businesses everywhere, HP may be a good avenue for additional earnings. A series of articles would be a working start. One very hard requirement is all English grammar needs to be prefect. I know because I have emails with some strict HP editors.

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