I'd like feedback on my article: Luck Is When Preparation Meets Opportunity.

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   Siddharth9999posted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Luck Is When Preparation Meets Opportunity. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   DrMark1961posted 7 years ago

   I think you have already had this suggestion, but I want to make it again so that you can do better here.
   Do you ever use a search engine to find something you want to read about cricket? Do you type into the search engine "people who have overcome adversity" or something along those lines? Probably not. That is because none of the articles in your search are going to be about cricket.
   If you want to allow people to find your article, you have to make the title about the subject of the artice. If it is about a cricket player that was prepared and used luck to succeed, you need to say so. If you do not, no one is going to find this and NO ONE is ever going to read it.
   I doubt that is what you want.

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      greenmindposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Yes this advice is still being ignored.

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         Natalie Frankposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         If you honestly want to improve then it's best not to ignore the advice of successful writers here at HP.  I agree with Drmark and others who have made the same suggestion.  You could possibly add Criketer VVS Laxman: then the rest of your title if you're set on keeping your original but the title needs to be on the subject of the hub and it is focusing on an individual as an example of something then it shouldn't look like just a general motivational article.

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            Siddharth9999posted 7 years agoin reply to this

            Yes, I will follow this suggestion now.

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         Siddharth9999posted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Yea, I will rectify my mistake now.

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      Siddharth9999posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, I'll definitely follow this advice.

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   Kenna McHughposted 7 years ago

   You are sharing ideas that need to be aligned. We all know that great athletes seize opportunities. You are offering your opinion. This needs to be clear to the reader and Google.

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      Siddharth9999posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for your advice.

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