Needing help with my article

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   tajwershakirposted 6 years ago

   My article has not been able to get published due to spammy elements. Kindly provide guideline how to improve it as it also states to address moderator set alerts before re publishing it. Needing help here
   https://hubpages.com/entertainment/Thir … easons-why

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      We can't see it as it hasn't been published.
      
      Have a look at this, it might help:  https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … tured-Hubs

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   JohnsTriviaposted 6 years ago

   You can find out what spammy elements mean by going here https://hubpages.com/faq/#Spammy-Elements. Pay attention to no. 11 and adjust accordingly.

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      tajwershakirposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I have tried to adjust errors i could get and i have re published it. Can you kindly check the link and highlight further elements needing improvement. Thanks
      https://hubpages.com/entertainment/Thir … easons-why

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         JohnsTriviaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         I'm not great at analyzing texts, I hardly find the motivation to check my own. But at a quick glance, I've noticed quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes and your headers are quite messed up. Only one paragraph is numbered (2).
         
         Regarding your writing: I highly recommend using a website (or app - you can add it to your browser). It's free and really easy to use, it helps a lot: www.grammarly.com. You just have to create an account and then you can quickly paste your text and check it out. If you add it to your browser, it will inform you immediately if there are any spelling mistakes.
         
         By quickly checking your text up to your songs selection, it pointed out 29 mistakes that you can easily fix with a single press of a button - i'll upload a screenshot.
         
         Give it a try and let me know if you need any help on how to use it, although it's quite simple and straightforward. Best of luck!
         
         

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            tajwershakirposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks alot with such a useful guidelines. Highly obliged for your help. Thanks again

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   Your article contains some rather verbose and convoluted sentences and poor English usage. Here's just on paragraph.
   
   "This dialogue really made me curious to watch this show from the very beginning and made me stick to it till the end indeed. It sounded too promising to the viewer that this show is not going to be a typical teen stuff."
   
   This could be much crisper - like this:
   
   This dialogue made me curious about the show and encouraged me to watch it to the end. The show is not typical teen stuff.
   
   There are many similar examples throughout the piece.
   
   Do you have permission to use the Netflix image at the start? Images have to be Creative Commons licensed.
   
   Also, there are a few large blocks of type that need to be broken up into smaller paragraphs.

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      tajwershakirposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for help. I shall follow your guidelines.

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