I'd like feedback on my article: 5 Steps to Install Incompatible Apps

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   Miz A Buuposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: 5 Steps to Install Incompatible Apps

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   Natalie Frankposted 6 years ago

   The first thing you need to do is make sure to spend time in the Learning Center so you understand what HP expects in an article and that you are fully aware of all the different elements that go into a well written, evergreen, stellar article.
   
   The biggest problem with the article are the screen shots you include.  First they are way too busy and include things that aren't relevant to what you are trying to explain.  Second, they include ads which even though they obviously aren't clickable and you wouldn't get income from them, is still a no-no for hubpages.  Turn off ads before doing screen shots and make sure the screen shot only includes specifically what you are describing in the text right before.  Also add captions to your screen shots to further improve clarity.
   
   I didn't WC your text but it seems a bit on the short side.  Shoot for at least 1000 words. You can add to the text through some of the suggestions below.
   
   Other things that would improve your article are:
   
   Provide an introduction explaining what you are going to talk about in the article and why it's a problem for many people.  Make sure it's understandable even for those of us who are computer and/or tech idiots   Keep in mind the reader's question and explain what you will answer in this article.  When would you need to do this and why?  Are there cautions to keep in mind as to deciding whether to allow your system to download an incompatible app (how do you know you can trust it, could it damage your system etc?)   Is this for Apple and Android or just one or the other?  If just for one what is the comparable method for the other?
   
   Explain what the different elements are in each step and why you need them.  What are the two apps you say to download and why do you need them?  Why do you need to download the game via Apkpure or MobSo instead of just downloading them directly?  What is API level? etc.
   
   Some of the images have "cheat engine" on top.  Do you need to download or use this as well?
   
   Make sure to proof read for typos and other errors such as "Then you after selecting common edit you need to change the minimum SDK version . . . "
   
   This step is particularly confusing as you just say you need to change the minimum SDK version then put a bunch of screens shots without the text to explain what you do in each one and why.
   
   I am not sure as to this part, I'm sure others would have the correct answer but is any of what you showed in your screen shots copyrighted and can you use screen shots of all of it without permission?
   
   
   Hope this helps you get on the right track and get your article published quickly.

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   Miz A Buuposted 6 years ago

   Thank you very much for giving a look on my article.

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