I'd like feedback on my article: Enhancing and taking care of your hormones...

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   Anupama Dixitposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Enhancing and taking care of your hormones with Estradiol Treatment (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hello, welcome.
      
      My suggestion is that you should add your medical qualifications to the 'about the author' bio on the article.

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         Anupama Dixitposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Hey, done

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            It isn't. It still says, "Anupama is a web enthusiast and a writer. Anupama has afforded his articles and write-ups autonomously and through various online forums."
            
            Where are the qualifications that show you are able to give medical advice, such as, "With proper estrogen and hormone treatment, you can cure ovary problems. These organs produce estrogen and if they fail to make the hormone, you might have to undergo hormone therapy. In that case, you may need supplemental estrogen."
            
            If you don't have such qualifications you can only write about these things from a personal point of view, and as a young man, that is impossible.
            
            Where is the advice to see your doctor first?
            
            You'll have to remove the spammy link. HubPages is not the place to promote questionable medical practices.
            
            If you have joined HubPages to write articles on behalf of other organizations, it's not going to work. Whatever information you have been given regarding promotion is erroneous. It's against HubPages' Terms of Use.
            
            https://hubpageshelp.com/

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   CYong74posted 6 years ago

   Your sentences are quite awkward.

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   theraggededgeposted 6 years ago

   Okay, you've changed it to say, "Anupama a hormone therapy, web enthusiast and a writer, has afforded his articles and write-ups."
   
   You're a 'hormone therapy'?
   
   Unless you are a qualified doctor or endocrinologist, you can't post this kind of thing. It's misleading, it's not fact-checked and you've been told what to write by that website you are promoting.
   
   Or maybe, you took it from here? https://www.healthline.com/health/women … e-symptoms
   
   Another issue: you seem to think that the product that you are promoting, Estradiol, is the same as naturally occurring estrogen. There are several instances where you mix the two things up, proving without doubt that you don't really know what you are writing about.

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   psycheskinnerposted 6 years ago

   There are legal restriction in the US, where Hubpages is based, on making therapeutic claims.    While most websites ignore them, Hubpages is typically a little more careful.  So unless you are a licensed health profession you need to stay away from telling people how to cure or treat health disorders unless you are covering "common sense" sort of advice.

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